Well...
Frist off, the music was pretty darn good. I can tell he used the same music program I'm using, bu tit was still good. Umm, handrawn is the word I'm looking for when I was looking at the flash. A lot of the stuff was handrawn. Umm, there were also some cycles that I noticed seemed kinda repeated, and some of the scenes lasted a bit long, like they'd never stop. I think this flash was more of a slideshow than anything. IF anything, I'd keep working at the graphics, 'cause that's pretty much the only thing that needs help on, and shorten some of the scenes if they do go on forever without you stopping it...cute seahorses ^_^