...yyyyyyeah...
I'm gonna have to go with the the guy under me said. even if you're new, any music maker of any kinda has to have some rythm, and this just doesn't. I mean how can you not hear that? It just doesn't sound right at all, I mean how can you overlook that? You should've tried to go with the drumloop instead of the pace that was obviously playing in your head...you should listen to your stuff more before you go submitting, especially if you're new...